Your Guide to a Clear and Direct Pomelo Grant

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๐ŸŒ ไธญๆ–‡ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด

A new Pomelo season is coming up, and itโ€™s time to write your grant application. You know the earlier you get your grant approved, the more time youโ€™ll have to collect donations. But writing the application can be daunting for some.

We got you! Follow our step-by-step guidance to make your grant clear and direct. Our template will help you draft an effective project description that donors will love.

Before you write ๐Ÿค”

Focus on the public good in your project. Make the public good the first and primary thing you talk about. This is essential to your application being approved to participate. If you need help determining what qualifies as a public good, read our article, Whatโ€™s a public good?Plan what you want to do and how you will achieve it. Pomelo sees grants return season after season, building on what they have achieved. Whether you are a new or returning grant, consider what you can do before the next Pomelo season. Break large milestones into smaller manageable parts.Note the main points you want to cover to organize your thoughts. Remember, first describe the public good, then explain your broader project as an example implementation of the public good. This will help structure your application when youโ€™re writing it.Plan ahead for multimedia. Create a high resolution image to make your grant stand out. Consider including a relevant video.Think about your audience. What is the best approach to present your project to them? Try to speak to different levels of technical knowledge.Introduce acronyms the first time you use them.Define or explain concepts that not everyone may know.

Write โœ

Donโ€™t panic!

We can help make this part easier.

Use our template as your guide. It takes you step by step through the process with tips and guidance along the way. You wonโ€™t miss any important points!

Starting in Season 4 and now available, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ you can create a draft for your application in Pomelo at any time (not just once applications are open).

Cover the following in your grant description:

Describe the public good. How does it qualify as non-rivalrous and non-excludable?What is the problem youโ€™re solving or the need youโ€™re addressing?What is your solution?What are the outcomes or deliverables youโ€™re planning for this season?What are the positive benefits of your public good? Who will benefit?How can the public good be used by others after its release?How do you plan to deliver? What is your proposed timeline?What is your budget? Create a flexible plan, so you can break your deliverables into smaller increments, depending on how much funding youโ€™re allocated. Plan smaller milestones that you can achieve with different levels of funding.If the public good that youโ€™re raising funds for functions as part of a larger product, you can explain how the public good portion works as part of it. Keep in mind that funding from Pomelo can only be used for the public good portion. Think of the larger product as an example of how the public good can be implemented.What are your long-term goals?Who are you? What knowledge and skills qualify you for this project? Who have you partnered or collaborated with?

Revise ๐Ÿค“

We understandโ€Šโ€”โ€Šyouโ€™re tempted to skip this section. But you got this. The time you spend revising what youโ€™ve written will mean more donors read through your entire grant.

Look at the big picture: the content, organization, and presentation.

Is any information unnecessary or repetitive?Is any essential information missing?Is the level of detail appropriate for your audience?Is the content focused on your project (the public good) and what you plan to achieve this season? Specify what youโ€™re going to deliver and how itโ€™s a public good.Does the order of your sections make sense?Are your headings accurate and useful?Are paragraphs short?Do you walk the reader through your project details at a good pace?

Edit ๐Ÿ”

This is where you correct errors and hard-to-read sentences that will distract your audience from your message. Leave your application alone for 24 hours (if possible) before editing.

Delete unnecessary and repetitive content.Read it out loud. Rewrite any sentences that sound awkward. Hemingway Editor identifies hard-to-read sentences and suggests simpler alternatives.Make your sentences short (15 to 20 words), but vary them so theyโ€™re not all the same length.Chunk your text in short paragraphs.Add headings and subheadings to divide and label your sections.Use bullets and numbered lists where you can.


Ask a friend to review and identify any sections that are confusing.Read your text backwards to spot typos.Proofreading Checker highlights errors in style, word choice, tone, grammar, and spelling.


Is there enough white space?Can you add images to help explain your project?Does your layout invite someone to start reading?

Final steps ๐Ÿ˜Œ

Youโ€™re almost done! Fill in the remaining fields to complete your grant application.

Returning grants, the Last Season Update field is your chance to build your reputation and credibility with donors. Tell the community what you delivered with the donations and matching funds from last season.

Under Project Information, you can offer ways for the community to connect with you and learn more. Add your project website, Twitter handle, team members, and GitHub repo.

Translate ๐Ÿ—ซ

Reach more community members and increase the potential for donations by translating your grant to other languages (English, Chinese, and Korean).

See our Pomelo Wiki for translation resources.

Publish ๐ŸŽ‰

Youโ€™ve successfully completed a grant application that Pomelo donors are going to love. Submit your application by clicking Join Season.

Next step: get ready to publicize your grant in the community!


ๆœ‰ไบ†ๆ ‡ๅ‡†ๆจกๆฟ๏ผŒ่ฎฉๆ‚จ็š„ๆฏไธ€ไปฝๆๆกˆ้ƒฝ่ƒฝ้กบๅˆฉ้€š่ฟ‡ใ€‚


ๆœ‰ๆˆ‘ไปฌๅœจ๏ผŒๅˆซๆ‹…ๅฟƒ๏ผๆŒ‰็…งๆˆ‘ไปฌ็š„ไธ€ๆญฅไธ€ๆญฅ็š„ๆŒ‡ๅฏผ๏ผŒๅฏไปฅๅธฎๅŠฉๆ‚จๆ›ดๅŠ ็›ดๆŽฅๅœฐ็ผ–ๅ†™ๆ˜Ž็กฎ็š„้กน็›ฎ็”ณ่ฏทใ€‚ๆˆ‘ไปฌ็š„ๆจกๆฟๅฐ†ๅธฎๅŠฉๆ‚จ่ตท่‰ไธ€ไธชๆœ‰ๆ•ˆ็š„้กน็›ฎไป‹็ป๏ผŒ็คพๅŒบๆๅŠฉ่€…ไผšๆ›ดๅฎนๆ˜“็†่งฃๆ‚จ็š„ๆƒณๆณ•ใ€‚

็ผ–ๅ†™ไน‹ๅ‰ ๐Ÿค”

้กน็›ฎๅบ”่š็„ฆๅ…ณๆณจๅ…ฌๅ…ฑๅˆฉ็›Šใ€‚่ฎฉๅ…ฌไผ—ไบงๅ“ๅˆฉ็›Šๆˆไธบ้กน็›ฎ่ฐˆ่ฎบ็š„้ฆ–่ฆๅ’Œไธป่ฆ็š„ๅ†…ๅฎนใ€‚่ฟ™ๅฏนไบŽ้กน็›ฎ็”ณ่ฏท็š„้€š่ฟ‡ไธŽๅฆๆ˜ฏ่‡ณๅ…ณ้‡่ฆ็š„ใ€‚ๅฆ‚ๆžœๆ‚จ้œ€่ฆ็กฎๅฎšไป€ไนˆๆ˜ฏๅ…ฌๅ…ฑไบงๅ“๏ผŒ่ฏท้˜…่ฏปๆˆ‘ไปฌ็š„ๆ–‡็ซ ๏ผŒไบ†่งฃไป€ไนˆๆ˜ฏๅ…ฌๅ…ฑไบงๅ“?่ฎกๅˆ’้กน็›ฎๆƒณ่ฆๅšไป€ไนˆ๏ผŒไปฅๅŠๅ›ข้˜Ÿๅฐ†ๅฆ‚ไฝ•ๅฎž็Žฐๅฎƒใ€‚PomeloไธŠ็š„้กน็›ฎๅฏไปฅไธ€ๅญฃๅˆไธ€ๅญฃๅœฐๅ‚ไธŽ่ฟ›ๆฅ๏ผŒๅปบ็ซ‹ๅœจๅ–ๅพ—็š„ๅŸบ็ก€ๆˆๅฐฑไน‹ไธŠใ€‚ๆ— ่ฎบๆ˜ฏไธ€ไธชๆ–ฐ็š„ๆˆ–่ฟ”ๅœบ้กน็›ฎ๏ผŒๆ‚จ้ƒฝๅบ”่ฏฅ่€ƒ่™‘ไธ‹ไธ€ไธชPomelo่ต›ๅญฃๆ‚จๅฏไปฅๅšไป€ไนˆใ€‚ๆŠŠๅคง็š„้‡Œ็จ‹็ข‘ๆ‹†ๅˆ†ๆˆๆ›ดๅฐ็š„ๅฏ็ฎก็†็š„้ƒจๅˆ†ใ€‚ๆณจๆ„ๆ‚จๆƒณ่ฆๆถต็›–็š„่ฆ็‚นๆฅ็ป„็ป‡ๆ€ๆƒณใ€‚่ฎฐไฝ๏ผŒ้ฆ–ๅ…ˆๆ่ฟฐไบงๅ“็š„ๅ…ฌๅ…ฑๅˆฉ็›Š๏ผŒ็„ถๅŽ่งฃ้‡Šๆ›ดๅนฟๆณ›็š„ไฝœไธบๅ…ฌๅ…ฑไบงๅ“็š„ไธ€ไธชไพ‹ๅญๅฎž็Žฐใ€‚่ฟ™ๅฐ†ๅธฎๅŠฉๆ‚จๅœจๆž„ๅปบ็”ณ่ฏทๆก†ๆžถใ€‚ๆๅ‰ๅ‡†ๅค‡ๅคšไธชๅช’ไฝ“ๅฝขๅผ. ๅˆ›ๅปบไธ€ไธช้ซ˜ๅˆ†่พจ็Ž‡็š„ๅ›พๅƒ๏ผŒไฝฟๆ‚จ็š„้กน็›ฎ่„ฑ้ข–่€Œๅ‡บใ€‚ๅฏไปฅ่€ƒ่™‘ๅŠ ๅ…ฅ็›ธๅ…ณ่ง†้ข‘ใ€‚ๆƒณๆƒณๅฌไผ—็š„ๅฟƒๅฃฐใ€‚ๅ‘ไป–ไปฌๅฑ•็คบ้กน็›ฎ็š„ๆœ€ไฝณๅ‘ˆ็Žฐๆ•ˆๆžœ?่ฏ•็€็”จไธๅŒ็ญ‰็บง็š„ๆŠ€ๆœฏ่ฏ่ฏญๆ่ฟฐใ€‚ๅœจ็ฌฌไธ€ๆฌกไฝฟ็”จ็ผฉ็•ฅ่ฏ็š„ๆ—ถๅ€™ไป‹็ปๅ…ถๅซไน‰ใ€‚ๅฎšไน‰ๆˆ–่งฃ้‡Šไธๆ˜ฏๆฏไธชไบบ้ƒฝ็Ÿฅ้“็š„ๆฆ‚ๅฟตใ€‚


ไธ่ฆ็ดงๅผ !





ๆ่ฟฐๆ‚จ็š„ๅ…ฌๅ…ฑไบงๅ“ใ€‚ๅฎƒๆ˜ฏๅฆ‚ไฝ•็ฌฆๅˆ้ž็ซžไบ‰ๆ€งๅ’Œ้žๆŽ’ไป–ๆ€ง็š„ๆกไปถ?ๆ‚จ่ฆ่งฃๅ†ณ็š„้—ฎ้ข˜ๆ˜ฏไป€ไนˆ๏ผŒๆˆ–ๆ‚จ่ฆ่งฃๅ†ณ็š„้œ€ๆฑ‚ๆ˜ฏไป€ไนˆ?ๆ‚จ็š„่งฃๅ†ณๆ–นๆกˆๆ˜ฏไป€ไนˆ?ๆ‚จๅœจ่ฟ™ไธช่ต›ๅญฃ็š„่ฎกๅˆ’ๆ˜ฏไป€ไนˆ?ๆ‚จ็š„ๅ…ฌๅ…ฑไบงๅ“ๆœ‰ๅ“ชไบ›็งฏๆž็š„ๅฅฝๅค„?่ฐไผšๅ—็›Š?ๅ…ฌๅ…ฑไบงๅ“ๅ‘ๅธƒๅŽ๏ผŒๅฆ‚ไฝ•่ขซไป–ไบบไฝฟ็”จ?ๆ‚จ่ฎกๅˆ’ๅฆ‚ไฝ•ไบคไป˜?ๆ‚จๅปบ่ฎฎ็š„ๆ—ถ้—ด่กจๆ˜ฏไป€ไนˆ?ๆ‚จ็š„้ข„็ฎ—ๆ˜ฏๅคšๅฐ‘?ๅˆถๅฎšไธ€ไธช็ตๆดป็š„่ฎกๅˆ’๏ผŒ่ฟ™ๆ ทๅฐฑๅฏไปฅๆ นๆฎๅˆ†้…็š„่ต„้‡‘ๅฐ†ๅฏไบคไป˜ๆˆๆžœๅˆ†ๆˆๆ›ดๅฐ็š„ๅขž้‡ใ€‚่ฎกๅˆ’่พƒๅฐ็š„้‡Œ็จ‹็ข‘๏ผŒๅˆถๅฎšๅฏไปฅๅœจไธๅŒ็š„่ต„้‡‘ๆฐดๅนณไธ‹ไบคไป˜็š„ๆˆๆžœใ€‚ๅฆ‚ๆžœๆ‚จ็ญน้›†่ต„้‡‘็š„ๅ…ฌๅ…ฑ้กน็›ฎๆ˜ฏไธ€ไธชๅคงไบงๅ“็š„ๅญ้ƒจๅˆ†๏ผŒๆ‚จๅฏไปฅ่งฃ้‡Š่ฟ™ไธ€้ƒจๅˆ†ๅ…ฌๅ…ฑไบงๅ“ๆ˜ฏๅฆ‚ไฝ•ไฝœไธบๅฎƒ็š„ไธ€้ƒจๅˆ†่ฟไฝœ็š„ใ€‚่ฏท่ฎฐไฝ๏ผŒPomelo็š„่ต„้‡‘ๅช่ƒฝ็”จไบŽๅ…ฌๅ…ฑไบงๅ“้ƒจๅˆ†ใ€‚ๅฏไปฅๆŠŠๆ›ดๅคง็š„ไบงๅ“ไฝœไธบๅฎž็Žฐๅ…ฌๅ…ฑๅˆฉ็›Š็š„ไธ€ไธชไพ‹ๅญใ€‚ๆ‚จ็š„้•ฟๆœŸ็›ฎๆ ‡ๆ˜ฏไป€ไนˆ?ๆ‚จๆ˜ฏ่ฐ?ๆ‚จๅ…ทๅค‡ๅ“ชไบ›็Ÿฅ่ฏ†ๅ’ŒๆŠ€่ƒฝๆฅ่ƒœไปป่ฟ™ไธช้กน็›ฎ?ๆ‚จๅ’Œ่ฐๅˆไฝœ่ฟ‡?

ไฟฎๆ”น ๐Ÿค“



ๆ˜ฏๅฆๆœ‰ไธๅฟ…่ฆๆˆ–้‡ๅค็š„ไฟกๆฏ?ๆ˜ฏๅฆ้—ๆผไบ†ไปปไฝ•้‡่ฆไฟกๆฏ?็ป†่Š‚็š„็จ‹ๅบฆๆ˜ฏๅฆ้€‚ๅˆๆ‚จ็š„ๅ—ไผ—็พคไฝ“?ๅ†…ๅฎนๆ˜ฏๅฆ้›†ไธญๅœจ้กน็›ฎ(ๅ…ฌ็›Š)ๅ’Œ่ฎกๅˆ’ๅœจ่ฟ™ไธ€ๅญฃๅฎž็Žฐไป€ไนˆ?ๆ˜Ž็กฎ่ฆๆไพ›ไป€ไนˆ๏ผŒไปฅๅŠๅฎƒๅฆ‚ไฝ•ๆˆไธบๅ…ฌๅ…ฑไบงๅ“ใ€‚ๆ‚จ็š„็ซ ่Š‚้กบๅบๅˆ็†ๅ—?ๆ‚จ็š„ๆ ‡้ข˜ๆ˜ฏๅฆๅ‡†็กฎๅ’Œๆœ‰็”จ?ๆฎต่ฝๅคช็Ÿญๅ—?ๆ˜ฏๅฆไปฅ่‰ฏๅฅฝ็š„่Š‚ๅฅๅ‘่ฏป่€…ไป‹็ป้กน็›ฎ็ป†่Š‚?

ๆ กๆญฃ ๐Ÿ”

่ฟ™ๆ˜ฏ็บ ๆญฃ้”™่ฏฏๅ’Œ้šพไปฅ่ฏปๆ‡‚็š„ๅฅๅญ็š„็Žฏ่Š‚๏ผŒ่ฟ™ไบ›ๅฅๅญไผšๅˆ†ๆ•ฃๅฌไผ—็š„ๆณจๆ„ๅŠ›ใ€‚ๅœจๆ กๆญฃไน‹ๅ‰๏ผŒๅฏไปฅ่ฎฉ่‰็จฟ้™็ฝฎ24ๅฐๆ—ถ(ๅฆ‚ๆžœๅฏ่ƒฝ็š„่ฏ)

ๅˆ ้™คไธๅฟ…่ฆๅ’Œ้‡ๅค็š„ๅ†…ๅฎนใ€‚ๅคงๅฃฐ่ฏปๅ‡บๆฅใ€‚้‡ๅ†™ไปปไฝ•ๅฌ่ตทๆฅๅฐดๅฐฌ็š„ๅฅๅญใ€‚Hemingway EditorๅฏไปฅๅธฎๅŠฉๆ‚จๆ‰พๅ‡บ้šพ่ฏป็š„ๅฅๅญ๏ผŒๅนถๆๅ‡บๆ›ด็ฎ€ๅ•็š„้€‰ๆ‹ฉใ€‚ๅฅๅญ่ฆ็Ÿญ(15ๅˆฐ20ไธชๅ•่ฏ)๏ผŒไฝ†่ฆๆœ‰ๅ˜ๅŒ–๏ผŒ่ฟ™ๆ ทๅฅๅญ็š„้•ฟๅบฆๅฐฑๅฏไปฅไธ้‚ฃไนˆๅ•่ฐƒใ€‚ๆŠŠๆ–‡็ซ ๅˆ†ๆˆ็Ÿญๆฎต่ฝใ€‚ๆทปๅŠ ๆ ‡้ข˜ๅ’Œๅ‰ฏๆ ‡้ข˜ๆฅๅˆ’ๅˆ†ๅ’Œๆ ‡่ฎฐ็ซ ่Š‚ใ€‚ๅฐฝๅฏ่ƒฝไฝฟ็”จ้กน็›ฎ็ฌฆๅทๅ’Œ็ผ–ๅทๅˆ—่กจใ€‚

ๆ ก้˜…

่ฏทๆœ‹ๅ‹ๅธฎไฝ ๅคๆŸฅๅนถๆ‰พๅ‡บ่ฎฉไบบๅ›ฐๆƒ‘็š„้ƒจๅˆ†ใ€‚ๅ€’็€่ฏปๆ–‡็ซ ๏ผŒๆ‰พๅ‡บๆœ‰้”™ๅ†…ๅฎนใ€‚ๆ กๅฏนๆฃ€ๆŸฅๅ™จ็ชๅ‡บ้”™่ฏฏ๏ผŒ่ฏ็š„้€‰ๆ‹ฉ๏ผŒ่ฏญๆฐ”๏ผŒ่ฏญๆณ•ๅ’Œๆ‹ผๅ†™ใ€‚

ๆ ผๅผ่ฎพ่ฎก

ๆœ‰่ถณๅคŸ็š„็•™็™ฝๅ—?ๆœ‰ๆทปๅŠ ๅ›พ็‰‡ๆฅๅธฎๅŠฉ่งฃ้‡Š้กน็›ฎๅ—?ๅธƒๅฑ€ๆ˜ฏๅฆๅธๅผ•่ฏป่€…ๅผ€ๅง‹้˜…่ฏป?

ๆœ€ๅŽไธ€ๆญฅ ๐Ÿ˜Œ

็›ฎๅ‰๏ผŒๆ‚จๅ‡ ไนŽๅฎŒๆˆไบ†ๆ‰€ๆœ‰็Žฏ่Š‚๏ผๅกซๅ†™ๅ…ถไฝ™ๅญ—ๆฎตไปฅๅฎŒๆˆๆ‚จ็š„้กน็›ฎ็”ณ่ฏทๅงใ€‚


ๅœจ้กน็›ฎไฟกๆฏไธ‹๏ผŒๆ‚จๅฏไปฅไธบ็คพๅŒบๆไพ›ไธŽๆ‚จ่”็ณปๅนถไบ†่งฃๆ›ดๅคšไฟกๆฏ็š„ๆ–นๆณ•ใ€‚ๆทปๅŠ ๆ‚จ็š„้กน็›ฎ็ฝ‘็ซ™๏ผŒTwitter๏ผŒๅ›ข้˜Ÿๆˆๅ‘˜ๅ’ŒGitHubๅบ“ใ€‚

็ฟป่ฏ‘ ๐Ÿ—ซ

.้€š่ฟ‡ๅฐ†ๆ‚จ็š„้กน็›ฎ็ฟป่ฏ‘ๆˆๅ…ถไป–่ฏญ่จ€(่‹ฑ่ฏญใ€ๆฑ‰่ฏญๅ’Œ้Ÿฉ่ฏญ)ๆฅๆŽฅ่งฆๆ›ดๅคš็š„็คพๅŒบๆˆๅ‘˜ๅนถๅขžๅŠ ๆๅŠฉๆฝœๅŠ›ใ€‚

่ฏท่ฎฟ้—ฎๆˆ‘ไปฌ็š„ Pomelo ็ปดๅŸบไปฅ่Žทๅ–็ฟป่ฏ‘่ต„ๆบใ€‚


ๆ‚จๅทฒ็ปๆˆๅŠŸๅฎŒๆˆไบ†PomeloๆๅŠฉ่€…้ƒฝไผšๅ–œๆฌข็š„้กน็›ฎ็”ณ่ฏท้ฃŽๆ ผใ€‚้€š่ฟ‡็‚นๅ‡ปๅŠ ๅ…ฅ่ต›ๅญฃๆฅๆไบคๆ‚จ็š„็”ณ่ฏทใ€‚

ไธ‹ไธ€ๆญฅ๏ผšๅ‡†ๅค‡ๅฅฝๅœจ็คพๅŒบๅฎฃไผ ๆ‚จ็š„้กน็›ฎ!

Pomelo ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ ์‹ ์ฒญ ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ

์ €ํฌ์˜ ํŠน๋ณ„์ œ์ž‘ ํ…œํ”Œ๋ฆฟ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ๋” ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด Pomelo ์‹œ์ฆŒ์ด ๋‹ค๊ฐ€์˜ค๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ, ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ ์‹ ์ฒญ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ๊ฐ€ ๋นจ๋ฆฌ ํ†ต๊ณผ๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก ๊ธฐ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๋” ๊ธธ์–ด์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์‹ ์ฒญ์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑ์ด ์ผ๋ถ€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ์–ด๋ ค์šธ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ €ํฌ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ์ €ํฌ์˜ ๋””ํ…Œ์ผํ•œ ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ํด๋ฆฌ์–ดํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์ €ํฌ์˜ ํ…œํ”Œ๋ฆฟ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ธฐ๋ถ€์ž๋“ค์ด ์ข‹์•„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ์„ค๋ช…์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๊ธฐ์ „ ์ค€๋น„ ๋‹จ๊ณ„ ๐Ÿค”

๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ์˜ ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ์— ํฌ์ปค์Šค๋ฅผ ๋‘์„ธ์š”. ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค๋ฃจ์–ด์•ผ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ์ด ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์‹ ์ฒญ์ด ์ฐธ์—ฌ์— ํ†ต๊ณผ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์ด๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋Š”๋ฐ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ž๊ฒฉ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ํ™•์ธ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์•„๋ž˜ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์ฝ์–ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ๋ž€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€?๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋ฅผ ์„ธ์šฐ๊ณ  ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋‹ฌ์„ฑํ• ์ง€ ๊ณ„ํšํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์‹œ์ฆŒ์— ๊ฑฐ์ณ์„œ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๋“ค์ด Pomelo ์— ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ์ž์‹ ๋“ค์ด ์ด๋ฃฌ ์„ฑ๊ณผ์— ๊ฑฐ๋“ญํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ฑด์„คํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ ์˜ค๋„ˆ ๋˜๋Š” ๋‹ค์‹œ ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•˜๋Š” ์˜ค๋„ˆ์ด๋“ , ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋‹ค์Œ Pomelo ์‹œ์ฆŒ๊นŒ์ง€ ์ž์‹ ์ด ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด ๋ณด์…”์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํฐ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋ฅผ ์‹คํ–‰ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•œ ์ž‘์€ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์œผ๋กœ ๋‚˜๋ˆŒ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.์ž์‹ ์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์–ดํ•„ํ•˜๊ณ ์ž ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ํ™•์ •ํ•˜๋ฉด ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ๋” ์ž˜ ์ •๋ฆฌํ• ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ๊ฒƒ์€, ์šฐ์„  ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์„ค๋ช…์„ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๊ณ , ๊ทธ๋‹ค์Œ ๋” ํฐ ๋ฒ”์œ„์—์„œ์˜ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ์„ค๋ช…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ์˜ ๋„์ž…์˜ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋ฐฉ์‹์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์‹ ์ฒญ์„ ์ข€๋” ์ฒด๊ณ„์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋งค์ฒด์— ๋Œ€ํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์„ธ์šฐ๊ธฐ. ๋†’์€ ํ•ด์ƒ๋„์˜ ์ด๋ฏธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์ฐฝ์ž‘ํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋—๋ณด์ด๊ฒŒ ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ด€๋ จ๋œ ์˜์ƒ์„ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•˜์‹ค์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์˜ค๋””์–ธ์Šค๋ฅผ ๊ณ ๋ คํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๋ฅผ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค„์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€? ๋ถ€๋™ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์ˆ ์  ์ง€์‹์ธต์„ ํ–ฅํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๋„๋ก ๋…ธ๋ ฅํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”.์•ฝ์นญ์„ ์ฒ˜์Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์‹œ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์†Œ๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.๋ชจ๋‘๊ฐ€ ์ต์ˆ™ํ•œ ๊ฐœ๋…์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ๋ฉด ์ •์˜๋ฅผ ๋‚ด๋ฆฌ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์„ค๋ช…์„ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๊ธฐ โœ

๋‘๋ ค์›Œํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”!

์ €ํฌ๊ฐ€ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๋•๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ €ํฌ์˜ ํ…œํ”Œ๋ฆฟ์„ ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ํŒ๊ณผ ๊ฐ€์ด๋˜์Šค๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‹จ๊ณ„๋ณ„๋กœ ๊ณผ์ •์„ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹ค์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ ์–ด๋–ค ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„๋„ ๋†“์น˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ์‹ค๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!

์‹œ์ฆŒ 4๋กœ ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์‹œ์ž‘๋˜์—ˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ํ˜„์žฌ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•œ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์ด ๋ฐ”๋กœ, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ์–ธ์ œ๋“ ์ง€ Pomelo ์—์„œ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ ์ดˆ์•ˆ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ• ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค (์‹ ์ฒญ์ด ์‹œ์ž‘๋˜๊ธฐ ์ „์—๋„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค).

๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ ์„ค๋ช…์— ์•„๋ž˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ๋“ค์„ ํฌํ•จํ•˜์„ธ์š”:

๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋น„๊ฒฝ์Ÿ์„ฑ ๋ฐ ๋น„๋ฐฐํƒ€์„ฑ์— ๋ถ€ํ•ฉ๋˜๋Š”์ง€์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ ์ž ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฌธ์ œ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ด๋ฉฐ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์ฑ…์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?์ด๋ฒˆ ์‹œ์ฆŒ์—์„œ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋Š” ์ตœ์ข…๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋˜๋Š” ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์˜ค๋Š” ์ด์ต์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”? ๋ˆ„๊ฐ€ ์ด์ต์„ ๋ฐ›๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋‚˜์š”?๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ๊ฐ€ ์ถœ์‹œ๋œ ํ›„, ์–ด๋–ค ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ด ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•œ๊ฐ€์š”?์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋ฅผ ์ด๋ฃจ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋‚˜์š”? ๊ณ„ํš๋œ ํƒ€์ž„๋ผ์ธ์ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋‚˜์š”?๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์žฌ์ •์ ์ธ ์˜ˆ์‚ฐ์ด ์–ผ๋งˆ์ธ๊ฐ€์š”? ๋ณด๋‹ค ์œ ์—ฐํ•œ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹œ์–ด, ๋ถ„๋ฐฐ๋œ ํŽ€๋”ฉ ๊ธˆ์•ก์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์€ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์œผ๋กœ ๋‚˜๋ˆŒ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ถ€๋™ํ•œ ํŽ€๋”ฉ ๋ ˆ๋ฒจ์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๊ฐ๊ฐ ์™„์„ฑ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•œ ์ž‘์€ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋“ค์„ ์„ธ์šฐ์„ธ์š”.๋งŒ์•ฝ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํŽ€๋”ฉ์„ ์‹ ์ฒญํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๊ฐ€ ๋ณด๋‹ค ํฐ ์ œํ’ˆ์˜ ์ผ๋ถ€๋ผ๋ฉด, ํ•ด๋‹น ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ ์ผ๋ถ€๋กœ์„œ์˜ ์—ญํ• ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์ฃผ์˜ํ•˜์‹ค ๊ฒƒ์€ Pomelo์—์„œ ๋ชจ์ง‘๋œ ํŽ€๋”ฉ์€ ์˜ค์ง ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ์— ํ•ด๋‹น๋˜๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„์—๋งŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ณด๋‹ค ํฐ ์ œํ’ˆ์„ ๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ ๋„์ž…์˜ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์žฅ๊ธฐ์ ์ธ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์ธ์ง€ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ•ด๋‹น ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ง€๋‹ˆ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์ง€์‹๊ณผ ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”? ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋„ˆ์‹ญ ๋ฐ ์ฝœ๋ผ๋ณด๋ ˆ์ด์…˜์„ ๊ฐ–๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์ƒ๋Œ€๋Š” ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?

๊ฒ€ํ†  ๋‹จ๊ณ„ ๐Ÿค“

์ €ํฌ๋Š” ์ดํ•ดํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹คโ€Šโ€”โ€Š์ด ๋‹จ๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์ง€๋‚˜์น˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์‹ฌ์ •์„. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚ด์–ด ์ด๋ฏธ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•œ ๊ธ€์˜ ๊ฒ€ํ† ๋ฅผ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๊ธฐ๋ถ€์ž๊ฐ€ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ ์ „๋ฐ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋” ์ž์„ธํžˆ ์ฝ์–ด ๋‚˜๊ฐ€๊ฒŒ ๋ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ „๋ฐ˜ ๊ทธ๋ฆผ์„ ๋ณด์‹œ๊ธฐ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค: ๊ฐœ๋…, ๊ตฌ์กฐ ๋ฐ ์ „๋‹ฌ.

๋ถˆํ•„์š”ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ค‘๋ณต๋˜๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ๋น ์ง„๊ฒŒ ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์˜ค๋””์–ธ์Šค์—๊ฒŒ ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํžˆ ์ƒ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์„ค๋ช…์ด ๋ฌ๋‚˜์š”?๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ (๊ณต๊ณต์žฌ) ๋ฐ ๋ณธ ์‹œ์ฆŒ ๋‹ฌ์„ฑํ•˜๊ณ ์ž ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ค‘์ ์„ ๋‘์—ˆ๋‚˜์š”?๊ฐ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ์ˆœ์„œ๊ฐ€ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž˜ ๋‚˜๋ˆ„์–ด ์ ธ ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?์ œ๋ชฉ๋“ค์ด ์ •ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋˜ํ•œ ๋„์›€์ด ๋˜๋‚˜์š”?๊ฐ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์ด ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•œ๊ฐ€์š”?๋…์ž๋“ค์ด ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ๋””ํ…Œ์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‹ค ํŽธํ•œ ํŽ˜์ด์Šค๋กœ ์ฝ์–ด๋ณผ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?

ํŽธ์ง‘ ๐Ÿ”

ํŽธ์ง‘์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„๊ณผ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ค์›Œ ๋…์ž๋“ค์„ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๊ณ ์ž ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฉ”์„ธ์ง€๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ํ—ท๊ฐˆ๋ฆฌ๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ตฌ์ ˆ๋“ค์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ ์ฒญ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•œ ๋’ค (๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด) 24์‹œ๊ฐ„ ๋’ค์— ํŽธ์ง‘์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

๋ถˆํ•„์š”ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ค‘๋ณต๋œ ๋‚ด์šฉ ์‚ญ์ œ.์†Œ๋ฆฌ๋‚ด์–ด ์ฝ์–ด๋ณด๊ธฐ. ์ด์ƒํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋“ค๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ตฌ์ ˆ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์“ฐ๊ธฐ. Hemingway Editor ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ ํž˜๋“  ๊ตฌ์ ˆ์„ ์ฐพ์•„๋‚ผ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉฐ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‰ฌ์šด ๊ตฌ์ ˆ๋กœ ์ถ”์ฒœ๋ฐ›์„์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ตฌ์ ˆ์„ ์งง๊ฒŒ,ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ( 15 ๋‚ด์ง€ 20๊ฐœ ๋‹จ์–ด) ๋ณ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์ฃผ์–ด ๋ถ€๋™ํ•œ ๊ธธ์ด์˜ ๊ตฌ์ ˆ๋“ค์„ ๋ณด์œ ํ•  ๊ฒƒ.๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ธ€์„ ์งง์€ ๋‹จ๋ฝ์œผ๋กœ ๊ตฌ์„ฑํ•  ๊ฒƒ.์ œ๋ชฉ ๋ฐ ๋‹จ๋ฝ ๋ณ„ ์ œ๋ชฉ์„ ๋‹ฌ์•„ ๊ฐ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๊ตฌ๋ถ„ํ•  ๊ฒƒ.ํ•„์š”์‹œ ๋ถ€๋™ํ•œ ํ˜•์‹์˜ ๋ฆฌ์ŠคํŠธ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ• ๊ฒƒ.

๊ต์ •

์นœ๊ตฌ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฆฌ๋ทฐ๋ฅผ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜์—ฌ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ธฐ.๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ๋’ค๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ์ฒ ์ž ์ฐพ์•„๋‚ด๊ธฐ.Proofreading Checker๋Š” ๊ฒฉ์‹, ๋‹จ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ, ์–ดํˆฌ, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ• ๋ฐ ์ฒ ์ž์˜ ์ž˜๋ชป๋œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ํ•˜์ด๋ผ์ดํŠธ ํ•ด์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


์ถฉ๋ถ„ํ•œ ์—ฌ๋ฐฑ์ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€?์ด๋ฏธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•˜์—ฌ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๋ฅผ ๋” ์ž˜ ์„ค๋ช…ํ• ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€?๋ ˆ์ด์•„์›ƒ์ด ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์ฝ์–ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋„๋ก ํ•˜๋Š”์ง€?

๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋‹จ๊ณ„ ๐Ÿ˜Œ

๊ฑฐ์˜ ๋‹ค ์™”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ๋‚˜๋จธ์ง€ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๋‹ค ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ ์‹ ์ฒญ์„ ์™„์„ฑํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์žฌ ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•˜๋Š” ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ์—๊ฒŒ, ์ง€๋‚œ ์‹œ์ฆŒ ์—…๋ฐ์ดํŠธ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์€ ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๊ธฐ๋ถ€์ž๋ฅผ ํ–ฅํ•ด ํ‰ํŒ๊ณผ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋„๋ฅผ ์Œ“์„์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐํšŒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ง€๋‚œ ์‹œ์ฆŒ์˜ ๊ธฐ๋ถ€์™€ ๋งค์นญํŽ€๋“œ๋ฅผ ์ด์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ์ด๋ฃฌ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ์™€ ๊ณต์œ ํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ์ •๋ณด ๋ถ€๋ถ„์—์„œ, ๋‹น์‹ ์€ ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ์ž์„ธํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋‹น์‹ ๊ณผ ์—ฐ๋ฝ์„ ๋‹ฟ์„์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ์‚ฌ์ดํŠธ, ํŠธ์œ„ํ„ฐ ๊ณ„์ •, ํŒ€ ๋ฉค๋ฒ„๋“ค, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊นƒํ—ˆ๋ธŒ ๋ ˆํฌ ๋“ฑ์„ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

๋ฒˆ์—ญ ๐Ÿ—ซ

๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ๋ฅผ ๊ธฐํƒ€ ์–ธ์–ด(์˜์–ด, ์ค‘๊ตญ์–ด ๋ฐ ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด) ๋กœ ๋ฒˆ์—ญํ•จ์œผ๋กœ์จ ๋” ๋„—์€ ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ ๋ฉค๋ฒ„๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค๊ฐ€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ๋ฐ›์„์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ž ์žฌ์  ๊ธฐ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ์ฆ๊ฐ€ํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

Pomelo ์œ„ํ‚ค์—์„œ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ ๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค๋ฅผ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

๋ฐœํ–‰ ๐ŸŽ‰

Pomelo ๊ธฐ๋ถ€์ž๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘๋ฐ›์„์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ ์‹ ์ฒญ์„ ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์…จ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹œ์ฆŒ ์ฐธ๊ฐ€ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋ฅผ ํด๋ฆญํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์‹ ์ฒญ์„ ์ œ์ถœํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

๋‹ค์Œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„: ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ๊ทธ๋ž€ํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ์— ์•Œ๋ฆด ์ค€๋น„๋ฅผ ํ•˜์„ธ์š”!

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